The new plan

Scene 1 will be more or less the same as before however instead of being in a car, the convicts friends will be waiting outside the prison to see him, the shots will stay the same however the scene will end with the trio walking out of shot rather than driving off. Scene 2 will now consist of the convict leaving the barbers and getting jumped by his enemies, however rather than them being in a white van and throwing him in, instead they will be walking/running around the corner and surrounding the convict not allowing him to escape.

Changing plans, again

The person who was meant to be playing the driver dropped out at the last minute so because of this we had to change the first scene. We were also unable to get the white van which we needed to we had to find a way to work around that as well, me and Toff spoke about this and then told Jacob the conclusion which we had came to. 

This is a photo of the original story bored we created however just after finishing the writing we experienced a huge problem meaning we needed to change the film once again. Due to this we didn't bother adding photos as we had to start creating a new story bored.

Scene 1 music

The final verse of this song will be used as diegetic music in scene one. I know the artist personally so I asked him if it would be okay to use it and he was 100% fine with it as it will also help him gain viewers of the song.


Gilly - Gritty in the City

Costume

Convict - Grey Tracksuit, Uncut hair
Driver & Friends - 'Hood' clothing
                                - Dark jeans
                                - Hoodies
                                - Baggy
The Boss - Dark clothing
                                - Black/Dark blue jeans
                                - Black jacket/coat/hoodie
Allies - ~Dark Clothing and faces covered
                                - Bandannas
                                - Scarfs

Update on characters and cast

Due to the change in plans we also had to decrease the amount of characters and cut actros from the film. The updated cast looks like this:


Convict - Jay
Driver - Ace
Friend 1 - Toff
Friend 2 - Femi


The Boss - Sam
Ally 1 - Warren
Ally 2 - Jonathan
Ally 3 - Jacob
Ally 4 - Chris
Ally 5/Snake 1 - Toff
Ally 6/Snake 2 - Femi

Changing plans

Here is the written version of our change in plans