The new plan

Scene 1 will be more or less the same as before however instead of being in a car, the convicts friends will be waiting outside the prison to see him, the shots will stay the same however the scene will end with the trio walking out of shot rather than driving off. Scene 2 will now consist of the convict leaving the barbers and getting jumped by his enemies, however rather than them being in a white van and throwing him in, instead they will be walking/running around the corner and surrounding the convict not allowing him to escape.